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DeathLies
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Wishes.
If only,
we had our wishes,
the pain might fade,
or would it gather,
while you sit with nothing,
to want,
nothing to hope for,
not anymore,
would you want to die,
maybe try and hurt someone else,
of course not,
if you had all the things you want,
surrounding you,
you'd just sit in the middle of it,
smile and be happy,
while the rest of the world,
watched,
through the window,
of your glass house,
so fragile but so full,
of your hopes,
your dreams,
while the world can just watch,
while you get all your wishes..





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Dragons Willow
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comment Commented on: Sat Jun 13, 2009 @ 09:27am
this sounds angry to me, and somehow envious. like all your dreams have been stripped from you and given to someone who doesn't deserve them. but also it's sad, the image of sitting among all your "things" and thinking your happy, but all the people that could have done that for free seem to be looking in thru the window at you and shaking their heads in pity at your fake dreams and wishes. this is great! first in awhile that i could accurately(in my mind) pick apart and describe to the author how i read it! u rock!


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