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First off, the song ISH FREAKING AWESOME. And chu wrote most of it! Actually, chu wrote about 19/20 of it. Lolz xDDD ITZ AMAZING! DANG, JEWLZIE! I LUFF IT! Itz...wow. Itz too gewd for words. I luff it. Just simply luff it.
Second off, although it ish amazing and gorgeous and probably da bestest song ever, itz WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY too long. We need to reduce it or somethin' o.o We could probably take away a couple of linez or versez and set it aside to put in a different song. Itz probable :3 But, wowz, I seriously luff it. CHU HAVE GOT A TALENT, GIRL. And I'm still learning guitar. I'm fixing to go see if Ash can teach me some of the cordz and shifting. Thankfully, itz treble clef, which I can read x3 Once we write some more songz, get a metronome, make up some rhythmz and beats and some good music and plotz to the songz, and learn to play our instrumentz, then we'll get somewhere! =DDDD We'll also need drumz and stuff...I have electric drumz at my house, but they're my dadz. Then again, my dad alwayz letz us play them...Hum. WE SHALL SEE.
But, DANNNNNGG! CHU HAVE GOT AN INCREDIBLE TALENT!!! CHU SHOULD SERIOUSLY BE A SONGWRITER OR A POET OR SOMETHIN'!!! =DDDDDDD EXCELLENTE! PARANORMAL FOREVER!

It still occurz to meh as tooh long, but I luff it anywayz! xDDD Lolz I like the final touch. I can believe you left me all aloonnnnnnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. I tried doing the fading thing, and itz hard going from really loud to really quiet. I'll work on it. Unless itz screamed. Then chu can try that! xDDDD Lolz I'm really leaning towardz the idea of chu being the screamist of the band! xDDDD

I wanna be in teh band im learning how to play the drumzzz and i can scream if you need a screamist biggrin

We could always use the drums and a screamist! YYYAAYYYY!! THANK YOU, MAR!! =DDDDD

Thats an awesome song hey if you ever record it send it to me I want to hear it!