I wrote this RLLY short story when I was bored... I write a lot of stories but this 1 is one of my favs cuz it so sad T^T
I dunno if I did the grammar right but I tried^^ I summited this in arenas so VOTE!!
]http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=100062105
I dunno if I did the grammar right but I tried^^ I summited this in arenas so VOTE!!
]http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=100062105
The fog was unbearable. And the rain was dropping out of the sky wet and cold. In a small village called Calm Water, two children was in a meadow outside the village. It was their secret place where they would play. There was no other children among the villagers. You see, it was a very small village far away from town or other villages.
"Are you sure we're aloud here when its so foggy and wet?" mumbled Lina.
"They won't know." smiled Nastumi.
"Hey? Can you make a promise?"
"Anything."
"Can we stay together forever?"
"Absolutely!"
And after that they both held hands. Soon Lina and Nastumi began to smell smoke. When Lina turned around, the village was on fire!! Fear for her parents she began running toward the village. When Nastumi and Lina arrived, blood was at their feet and vicious vampires were killing the villagers. Their fangs dripping of blood was so hard to look at. Nastumi scream as a vampire started feeding on his mother. The vampire looked at Nastumi and smiled. It wasn't a normal smile. It was filled with evil. The vampire rushed at Nastumi and beared his fangs. Lina couldn't stand it ,so she went in front of Nastumi and the vampire reached for her fragile neck and bit it. Lina screamed in pain. In a few minutes she was lying in a pool of blood. She could see Nastumi crying out to her.
"No!! No!! Lina!!" Nastumi cried.
"I-I'm sorry... I couldn't fulfill our promise..." Lina spoke in a whisper.
After she said those words Lina fell into the darkness still thinking about Nastumi.
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