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My Own Truth This is my poetry... I'm sorry if I'm not that good. Please help me become a better poet.


blu_aura
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Hi!! feel free to post any coments you wish.

My Insanity

You who have made me have broken me,
The word that you always spin,
Make me confused.
Now I don't know what to think.
Don't know what to speak,
Don't know what to know.
I am know almost grown,
Yet,
I feel nothing.
I don't even feel the cold air around me,
Nor the fire next to me.
I'm a shell of the boy who everyone once knew,
I can't feel anything.
Because of you.
Yet,
I'm not full of sorrow like how you said
Because I cannot feel sorrow,
I can't feel anything.
Now I stand facing the world,
and don't know what to do.
You like the control you have over me
and you won't give it up.
Yet,
What you don't know is what I'm telling you.
You made my life miserable
and not worth living.
But as I stand here on the edge of what I was,
I'm here to say,
"Thank-you, you set me free."



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Mistoffelees221
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comment Commented on: Mon Sep 05, 2005 @ 07:54pm
I LOVE YOUR POEMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are sooooooooooooooo much better than me!!!!!! I love your avi too!!! He is smexy heart heart


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