i made up these poems and they are not that good but i like them anyway:
Blood and chocolate
dark and sweet
like the love i was given
blissful and painful
your lips red as blood
seeping through your heart
your eyes as sweet as candy
you were once mine
but now you are gone
bliss in the sweet release of life
the dark closing in
but which is sweeter?
blood...or chocolate?
and my other ones:
Dreams
lie awake in the darkness
cold sweat running down my face
i feel like sreaming
and blacking out into oblivion
the dreams of you
wont stop
and i cant take it anymore
i miss you and i cant sleep
your absense brings pain
and i cant dream
Miss You
without you
in my mind i cry
i want to talk to you
but i cant
i am caged
and i cant breathe
i want to break free
because
i miss you
i know that they suck, so give me some critisizim to make them better!
AfterDark19 Community Member 
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