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Sexybitch15745
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Poem I wrote while depressed
(Just Like My Last Post, This Poem Is Also Quite Stupid)

Outside, looking in
On the outside, looking in,
pertruded, excluded, and alone.
Such loneliness, it is to be a sin,
one for which is constantly atoned.
Abandoned and in the dark,
robbed of all joy.
Like being on an empty and snow-covered field.
I was thrown out like society's old toy.
In the midst of cruelty and hate, I sit patiently and I wait.
My day is to come, I will have my fun...
Let's just hope it's not with a bullet and a gun.

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...//___// Drawing by: partiegirl


(excuse the spelling) neutral





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Kisaki_Yuri
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comment Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 02:07am
nice 2 meet a fellow poet. nice poem


comment Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 02:11am
Thanx. When I posted it on forums, it was a terrible failure. I've never recieved so many insults in one post ever, so that means a lot.



Sexybitch15745
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Kisaki_Yuri
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comment Commented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 02:15am
some of the people on this sit are a little whack. im not really surprised they'd do something like that especially 2 something like this. np. u're a natural


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