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Young poets and Story-writers


maiden of the stars
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Harsh
As I walk walking around,
I saw an old man,lying on the ground.
At frist I thought he was dead,
but I saw him move his head.
I slowly walked towards the man.
When he heard my footsteps he took out a can,
"Could you please give some change to a man?
I am poorer then poor.
I've sold everything I own, even my wooden floor."
I wen tthrough my purse and got some change.
I handed it to him, "What a shame,my name is Range."
I said. "Thank you.
Your kindness is rare, oh and my name is Lou."
he said. "I have nothing to eat.
The bugs ate all my wheat.
I have given up on hope.
I sit here all day and mope.
With a heavy sigh, he closed his eyes for the last time.
It seems like such a crime
to just give up and suddenly die.
He never complained or or had time to cry.
One thing I know is true,
I'll never forget my good friend Lou.






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Blackrain381
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comment Commented on: Fri Aug 24, 2007 @ 01:55am
Nice poetry Cowy.


comment Commented on: Sun Nov 11, 2007 @ 02:46pm
Thanks ^_^



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