Random Poem of Boredom 1

• Artist: Marwolaeth o Angylion
• Description: Just a poem I wrote when I was home alone one night.
• Date: 02/07/2012
• Tags: poem darkmoon adrian dark

You hurt,you bleed
And I don't care
You've thrown my heart
Who knows where
I'm out, I'm done
You better run
You cry, and moan As I begin to pull
As my blood lust is soon full
Time again for me to sing
My words will make your heart sting
Life is done
Your story's at an end
But a life,
I can lend.

Comments

[critic-the-homeless]

Good job. It has a good flow of rhythm and rhyme