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i cannot describe my feeling
i have demon destroying this crap that doesn't belong
no one could ever understand but it a gentle yet quick feeling
its when you never know what to do when all this crap is going on
there are no words coming out of your mouth and you quickly take a breath
and at that moment it goes away and there is pain going through your body
you gaze in agony and awe... your temperature starts to drop and you slowly climb to the floor
you turn around and it hits you again for the enjoyment of the pain you are experiencing
then you slowly close your eyes and cross down with blood flowing out of your body
stab marks all through your body and only one glimpse of you killer
death takes your to your destination and slowly gazing in awe of what had happened to you
- by CrimsonKnight54 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/27/2012 |
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- Title: the experience of a murder
- Artist: CrimsonKnight54
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- Date: 01/27/2012
- Tags: experience murder
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- Slinkenhofer - 02/12/2012
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I stopped at "no one could ever understand." If the reader can't understand, then what's the point in writing about it?
Also, fix your grammar mistakes. No one will ever take you seriously if you don't capitalize or use proper punctuation. - Report As Spam