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Sleep sweet, little angel.
I swear things will all work out.
I know your tired and hungry,
and things are tough right now.
(Things seem hard right now,
but it will all work out.
Daddy will be home soon,
and he'll bring your sister too.)
Alice, I know your a little scared,
and Daddy and I aren't the best.
I know Alanie is a tad difficult,
and it seems like we're in a mess.
But please, My Darling Alice,
Please try to understand,
that I need you to be a big girl.
And there is no such thing as wonderland.
Keep your dreams in your head,
we can't keep chacing Daddy away.
I know your sick but pease sweetheart,
just please try to act sane.
- Title: Little Alice
- Artist: Rkah
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Description:
A poem from Alices mom after her husband leaves because Alice is declaired clinically insane after she tells all the children at school about her adventures in wonderland.
This is a coupled poem with Maybe Alice.
I've very Alice lately. - Date: 01/20/2012
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Rkah - 02/19/2012
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Thank you.
It actually did stop there before we started filming our new movie "Alice"
This poem is based off the movie.
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- Aleydream - 02/11/2012
- I think this poem would be better with less of a story. If you made it about just how hard life can get for a family who used to be stable to suddenly have nothing and start living on the streets. If you stopped it at the fourth stanza I think it would make a very strong impact without needing the drama of your description. Chasing instead of chacing >>
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