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My heart grieves in apprehension
As the alluring comfort in darkness is broken
She is an amber presence on the horizon
A feared and loathed atrocity by soldier tribunal
My being does not share my comrades disposition
Their sunkern eyes trade her for the dim trenches
I bask in her splendour as if it were the final hour
Fleeting thoughts come and go during our embrace
My sorrows guise under a single question
"When will they look at sienna sky and truly cherish it?"
She blushes at our admiration
Unknowing of our lack of appreciation
My body shuddered at the thought
"If I fall will my emotions beunkownst to her?"
From this I was bestowed the will to live
For you must know how the truth in my words
A battle ensued.
My hand crippling, a pain exuding from inside
I whispered: "Please, make haste thy constellations,
If our paths do not cross how will she know?"
Pleas offered no respite from the maroon atmosphere
My eyes will fall into the black I desperately avoided
I was certain, my fate had been decided
Flames menacingly darted around like possessed pirouettes
It's grimacing facade then seemingly ended
My soul had been delivered to the great beyond
I denied the sanctity, peace and warmth destiny offered
for I did not belong under heaven's repute
I turned from thy garish divinity
My journey led me to a knotted willow
It's arms billowed under autumn's reprise
As the brightest star bit into the hills
I realised had not been fighting for justice nor victory
My mind had not lost to the war or desolation
For memories of her consoled me in my solitude
Such a semblance to the great Sky's jewel
I had created such an apparation of her
My purpose lay here, an embelished headstone
"I am here, be alone no longer and we shall walk to the ends of the earth"
It was there she appeared , eyes aglow contoured by her smile
I felt her hand in mine as we began our neverending stroll
My thoughts were that those in the ethereal plane are a doomed existance
Trapped by anguish, lost and never to be found
as we strolled through starlit boulevard
I knew that I had been wronged, heaven could not compare

- Title: From him to her
- Artist: Nightre
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Description:
Interpret it how you want, maybe I will tell you the story or maybe I won't.
Please feel free to give me advise on how to improve it, I am quite proud of it and this is my first submission into the writing arena. I really don't know what kind of poem this is, I just kind of freestyled it. Sorry for not following traditional poem structures and what not. - Date: 11/21/2011
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