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Oh my rose,
From red to bleeding blue,
I can never believe,
This thought to be true.
Delicate petals,
Soft like the rain,
Whom fall apart,
From hidden pain.
My rose,
That bleeds,
My rose,
And its needs.
Why do you keep silent,
When I can see your scream?
Why do you awake,
If you love so much, that dream?
Rose, with your thorns,
Rose, who has been tattered,
Who's once loving heart,
Has been ripped and shattered.
Your sharp edges,
They have grown stronger.
Waking to golden dawns,
You can stand no longer.
With it's light,
I see the tears in each place,
I watch you fall,
Now death, stands in your space.
Rose, i've held forever,
The one who has stayed true,
You lie empty on the floor,
Every petal bleeding blue.
- by kaitlynn7595 |
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- | Submitted on 08/02/2011 |
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- Title: every rose bleeds blue
- Artist: kaitlynn7595
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- Date: 08/02/2011
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Comments (1 Comments)
- LunaAkitylasaraleen - 10/12/2011
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I quite like this, though I don't usually like poetry posted here. This is very lovely. The imagery is strong and yet delicate, the meter and rhyme are very well done. There are a few English mistakes, but on the whole this poem is very enjoyable, beautiful, and well written. Good job!
I especially like that you didn't waste a single word. I hope you post more in the future. - Report As Spam