what resides within. . .

• Artist: kiyo lief
• Description:
• Date: 07/12/2011
• Tags: resides within

i feel it,flowing through my vains.its desire and power.disease and hate.the fangs of rage burn within me.blue flames growing high.a dark beast ,silver claws scratching the walls of its prison.waiting for release.waiting to bring the storm of destruction. . .
-kiyo

Comments

[troxtrox1AKAfencesRscary]

instead of putting it as a paragraph, put it as separate lines
so

i feel it
flowing through my veins
its desire and power
disease and hate
the fangs of rage burn within me
blue flames growing high
a dark beast
silver claws scratching the walls of its prison.waiting for release
waiting to bring the storm of destruction. . .

and check grammar
u meant veins not vains
and theres spsoed to be a space after evry period
and space goes after a comme not before