- These are my lyrics I wrote myself smile
- by Crypticjon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/19/2011 |
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- Title: Where were you?
- Artist: Crypticjon
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Description:
I fail into the water,
I crawl into the sea,
I bleed into the moss,
That you have never seen
I come to the sunset,
and scream your name,
but you weren't there,
so you are the one to blame
The flame is obliviant,
fearful from the eye,
only brings a tear,
and nothing else,
but to cry
Only the beauty,
from her heart,
can bring him,
back to life
making him happy and alive - Date: 06/19/2011
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Rkah - 07/12/2011
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What this one said VVVV
But also I enjoyed this lyric to an extent. It was very good in parts and very, rocky and unstable in some parts. Very scetchy and not fluid. So maybe work on that kay? PS that whole box thing gets me everytime too, so don't sweat it. Just edit it. - Report As Spam
- Kumajirou-Canada - 06/19/2011
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You got the Desc mixed with the actually box you type in??
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