What have I Done?

• Artist: I Nagisa Furukawa I
• Description: I wrote this in 8th grade (and im now 14 years old).
  This blank verse poem was for my English assignment
• Date: 04/14/2011
• Tags: have done

My tears streamed down,
The colourless cheeks -
And their no -longer trembling lips,
The captive animal within
got released from her cage.

No more burning desires.
Rusted metal filled my nose
Her face so pale,
It frightens me to behold -
What a monster I have become.

My fingers desiring,
to stroke her face
and tell her I am sorry
But now it's too late.

Comments

[oOEulinOo]

This is pretty good.