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I dont deserve anything in the world
Only death and sadness
The emptiness and pain is like drowning in frozen water
The only thing you can feel is the frozen pain of being forever alone
You can't hold your breath much longer
You pray for death and hope your pain will end soon
You feel numb
Your eyes close as you drown in frozen water
Hope you guys liked it biggrin

- Title: Frozen water
- Artist: cgirl1234
- Description: its just a dark gothic kinda sad poem and no im not emo i just like to write dark poetry
- Date: 01/12/2011
- Tags: frozen water
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Such Disappointment - 01/13/2011
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4/5, It is really good, http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/non-fiction/vote/?entry_id=102440891
Can you vote for mine... I don't think it is good, I hope you like it, I'm terrified, I doubt anyone will like it. - Report As Spam