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They took away
Our fun and games
Did they not see
We were still
Mere children?
They took away so much,
Our escape,
Our happiness,
Our hope...
And yet
They still expected
The impossible
But how were we
To make it through
When we had no
Hope,
No happiness
To draw forth the
Effort,
The energy
To do what
They wanted?
Did you forget
That we are still
Children
Did you forget
That these are
The last few years we have
To live freely,
Unchained,
With no responsibilities
Or harsh demands
Or reprimands?
- Title: They Took Away our Fun & Games
- Artist: DDrox316
- Description: I was upset at my parents... it has a weak ending, but I don't know how to end it. it needs a strong ending, something like, really rebellious or threatening. actually no, something that will make the parents feel bad, without the kid acting out and pulling the "i'm going to run away!" card. any ideas/thoughts?
- Date: 01/05/2011
- Tags: they took away games parents
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