Elemental Chant

• Artist: ClockworkQuill
• Description: A little chant I wrote back in February last.
• Date: 12/19/2010
• Tags: elemental chant

Fire, fire burning bright
will not you be my shining light?
Take this air and show the way
in which my destined path doth lay.
Like water do let me flow
to where Goddess have me go.
Down these earthen paths I walk
traveling to places of which spirits talk.

Comments

[Whip]

I like it. I wonder why you choose to use such archaic language in place of more modern words. Is it specifically to evoke a feel of yesteryear? Of times ancient? It's a good feel, but feels weird to my tongue when read aloud. I needed to rethink how I read it to myself... which is great, nice and thought provoking.

[Kimiko Owl-Rider]

I like this a lot ClockworkQuill.
I love all your other poems to!
You are an extremely amazing writer and never stop writing or i'll get really annoyed razz