I

• Artist: xX Natalie the Lovable Xx
• Description: This poem I made is called "I". This is about a person that has a loved one but the loved one is gone or isn't close by to make the person happy. I made this for all the people out there that have a loved one that is to far away. I'm not in love or love anyone besides my parents, God, my family and friends. I just made this on a hot summer day at the park. This just came to my mind out of nowhere and I began to write it so here it is now one of my favorite poems "I"
• Date: 10/03/2010
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When I look up to the sky the bright stars make out your beautiful name.

I sit outside enjoying the peacful yet, sad moment because I would like to be enjoying it with you.

I look off into the distance and I see the tall grass slowly moveing side to side as if to be danceing to a love song on a lovely evening.

The cool breeze kisses my cheeks and I think of how great it felt when you gave me a kiss.

I felt touch of happiness when a group of bees flew past my ear buzzing and danceing so happily.

But then sad when I turn to my right feeling like the old big tree lonley and cold, because I don't have you with me.

The feeling of being happy turns into sadness because I think of you and of how much I love you and want you by my side but don't have you.

How long will this last?

Because all I need is you.

You are like some kind of fuel that keeps my motor of love running.

BUt know that without you, my fuel.

I can not go a mile long without you in my life.

Comments

[Shikalazynara]

This poem has a lot of beautiful emotions in it. I only rated it one star down because I can tell you didn't revise it due to the grammatical errors. But it's beautiful. I needed to read a poem like this today to feel like I wasn't alone. Very nice.