Lovers last dance

• Artist: Give Me A Hint
• Description: Ive been writing a lot. heres one of my most recent pieces.
• Date: 10/03/2010
• Tags: lovers last dance

Lovers Last Dance

With certain words I cant deny, no question besides the occasional why?

I left my heart open slightly ajar, inviting you in like a hooker at a bar.

Theirs one thing that you most certainly can't confuse, I'm not someone you would like to misuse.

If you think your daring enough to take the chance, I'll show you a true lovers romance.

As our arms are at a strong embrace I shall never forget the look on your face, as you decided to take the chance and share with me this lovers last dance.

~Chelsey G.

Comments

[JD-metalist]

I enjoyed it very much, but the ending... I think there should've been more to it. It was good, you should continue to work on it and not set it aside just yet.
4 stars.