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The moon gazed at me, as i glanced back at it, meeting the all-knowing eyes.
Me, on Earth, he, in heaven, staring down at me.
Wondering. Curious. What is he doing?
I was on my knees, hands joined together in a silent prayer.
I committed the gravest of crimes, buried deep beneath, drowning in regret.
My crime?
I made him cry.
You, oh, the Goddess of Night.
I blame you for the misfortune of this night.
Oh, Day. Why did you enter this sleepless game?
Why me? Why now?
Because of your prank the life of mine is crumbing into dust.
Slowly burning away my soul.
Slowly.
Burning into dust.
The sky cried so hard.
Those tears hit my back and arms.
I, in regret, stood in the light of a street-lamp.
The moon, in it's full grace, still staring in wonder.
Why do i wander?
Moon, being the child of Night, illuminated the darkness, yet put more wood into the scorching flame.
My soul.
I've sold myself to the Devil, just so i could reverse what I've done three hours past.
But? The curse never washed away, even with all the fright.
Frigid tears fell down from the perfectly dark sky.
Were they helping or cursing? Angels crying.
My Angel falling...
- Title: My Angel falling...
- Artist: D3a7h_G0d
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Description:
Based on an experience of mine...
As confusing as it might be, it's something i needed to get out of myself.
It's nowhere close as good as the previous one, but i hope it still has some meaning to it.
Once again, i tried another style. It just came down on me like this.
I hope you enjoy. ^^ - Date: 09/07/2010
- Tags: love d3a7hg0d sadness regret
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Comments (3 Comments)
- omotavi - 09/07/2010
- The imagery is beautiful. There's so much in so little, I feel compelled to take an hour of my time rereading each line. Like always. = u= Oh you. Again, something too personal for any of us readers to understand. There are key elements to this poem that we do not have, as readers, available that make this brilliance complete. Again, thank you. = u= I enjoyed it. As always.
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- MochaToast - 09/07/2010
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I like the layout makes the main words stand out.
It's confusing, but I can somehwat understand, You need to take apart the words and think, but it's a nice poem ^^ really good - Report As Spam
- cooljam26 - 09/07/2010
- It is a wonderful poem. You have great skill for poetry and I hope there will be more to come.
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