I'm Searching For You

• Artist: Quinothy
• Description: I wrote this one on........February 25, 2010. I was reading through my diary from 8th grade and this poem was written in it, so I copied it into my Writer's Diary. So, now I am putting it here for my fellow Gaians to read. I hope you enjoy it!~ [:
  (Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!)
• Date: 08/21/2010
• Tags: searching

There are so many people who love me,
So why do I feel so alone?
I have nothing but this heart and pen,
To call my very own.
I have no special someone,
To stay by me through and through,
But hopefully if you're reading this,
That someone could be you.
I know I sound so corny,
With my rhyming poem lines,
But other than thinking of you all day,
I have npthing to help pass time.
So maybe you're my someone,
And maybe you are not,
But I know that when I think of you,
My heart turns into a knot.
My cheeks get red and rosy,
And my teeth begin to chatter,
So you approach me promptly,
And ask me, "What's the matter?"
I tell you that I'm alright,
When I really want to say,
That, " I love you more than anything,
You're perfect in every way."
I'm sorry that I keep going on,
And making a big deal,
But writing is the only way,
That I can express what I feel.

Comments

[Quinothy]

Thank you for pointing out that mistake for me!~ && Thank you for commenting!~ [:

[Symphonic Maiden]

I really like this. In the 12th line, there is a P instead of an O in nothing, I just wanted to let you know. xD

Writing is how I express myself too!

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I give this 5/5 it's beautiful!