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in our own preceptions
the way we see
it's only our own viewpoint
narrow and cut off from everyone else
only from yourself can you see
inside the mind of one
but what if you could see another
see yourself in the light of someones eyes
in the light of a lover
would you fall in love with yourself
could you fall in love with yourself
could you see you in their arms if you were them
would you want to hold you
hug you
kiss you
love you
would you leave yourself behind
and move on to someone else
could you
and what if they saw the way you see them
what would they think
would they leave themselves
make you leave them
would they make you love them
hold them
kiss them
hug them
would you do what they wanted
or would you keep trying keep hoping
maybe keep lying to yourself
telling you that they want you and you want them
or is it just that you want yourself
or do you want them to want you
but you can't ever know
because you're confined
trapped in your own mind
your own head
your own perspective
to only see your own way
you can't see you in their light
in the light of a lover
in the light of a friend
in the light of a family memeber
in the light of a relative
confined in our own preceptions
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- | Submitted on 08/13/2010 |
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- Title: in our own preceptions
- Artist: xX_Kozakura_Xx
- Description: thinking about viewpoints and the fact that you can only really experience life through your own eyes....
- Date: 08/13/2010
- Tags: preceptions
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Comments (1 Comments)
- emeraldpuppy9 - 08/16/2010
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this is pretty good (:
i like it biggrin the parallelism works out very well and adds to the flow of the poem ^^
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