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Today I saw a smiling man so far away
I wish I was as happy as he
But I thought I saw a tear
Maybe it was just me
I hear a crying man across the street
Though he smiles in my direction
Soft whispers of melancholy reach my ears
But not until he's done
I see a dying man on his knees across the room
Though he makes not the slightest sound
He knows not that I hear his pain
As he falls to the ground
I see a broken man beside me
Though he appears to be quite fine
Wears a veil to mask the pain inside
And only I see through it's lines
- by RisexWithxthexDead |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/08/2010 |
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- Title: Broken Man
- Artist: RisexWithxthexDead
- Description: (Just so you know it's the same man in every verse) I hope you like it as this poem actually has a meaning :D Please rate and comment. Thank you.
- Date: 08/08/2010
- Tags: broken
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Softball Gurlz - 08/08/2010
- i like it. . . a lot : )
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- Doctor Clarice - 08/08/2010
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Very Nice.(:
I quite like the concept.
My only critque is there is no punctuation. - Report As Spam