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after all the years of suffering and pain
you stood right there and watch my life go away
you never thought that you hurt me so
the even more reason to let you go
at first you stood by my side
and said that as long as were together no one will die
but at the end ill always know
your goig to lie
deceive
and leave me alone
- by hottemper97 |
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- | Submitted on 07/30/2010 |
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- Title: u left me alone
- Artist: hottemper97
- Description: it could be about death, hard break ups, screwed up love life, anything that apeals to you
- Date: 07/30/2010
- Tags: breakup death
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- MyDarkestPassion - 08/11/2010
- nice but with the ending word on the last line try to make it rime with with the word or sentence above. for example "deceive and leave me alone." instead using "alone" put something in there to go like this. "deceive and leave me be." ok? just thought i'd help ^^
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