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I'm the birdwatcher,
watching the bird of my heart fly away
I'm the time stopper
trying to freeze these moments day by day
I'm the hopeless romantic
who's heart always skips a beat or two
I'm the songwriter
that gets twisted deep into her thoughts, pleading to know whats true.
I'm the victim of a crime
still feeling the pain that's been embedded in my heart
I'm the one who took advantage of time
ashamed now in looking at the clock, ignoring the thoughts that start.
I'm the fortune teller
warning everyone of the world around us crumbling
but they all bury their heads in their hands and wrap themselves in ignorance
I'm the old fashioned drug seller
selling her peers doses of happiness and laughs,
but rarely ever indulge
I'm the one to kiss and tell
for you're the one I want to show off
I'm the stargazer
trying to get lost in the glittering spell
I'm the wisher
who used up all three wishes on you
I'm the fisher
fishing for the catch that i've forever pursued
and I'm just this poet
trying to twist my feelings into these soft little words
thinking to myself,
how I could have held onto that one bird.
- by yellowsubmariner95 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/28/2010 |
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- Title: I'm the...
- Artist: yellowsubmariner95
- Description: Poem about my best friend who moved away from me. I hope you guys enjoy it :D
- Date: 07/28/2010
- Tags: poetry
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Comments (2 Comments)
- MandiLila - 08/09/2010
- Deep, I like it. I've also been inspired to write due to a bestie moving away. Sucks, doesn't it?
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- encii - 07/30/2010
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Decent. Try smoothing your sentences a little
"I'm the fortune teller
warning everyone of the world around us crumbling
but they all bury their heads in their hands and wrap themselves in ignorance"
isn't very well structured and doesn't quite match the patern used in the rest of the poem - Report As Spam