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lonely screams in a silent night
a painful memory brought back to life
many useless crys of help
very few who actually help
many try to find their place
many try to understnd theirselves.
we strive to be who we want
but is that really What we want?
do we want to live peaceful?
heh is that even possible?
without the crime we'd be bored
without this lonely time we'd be bored
sins can be forgiven
but they cant be forgotten
pracrastators forget things.. easy
it is their job to remember.
for if they do not
then they do not
the sins of those forgotten
can not be forgiven
nor can they be rejected
for all they are is rejection
these are the thoughts sworming in my head
all of them,maybe all, make no sense.
sins.
we all have em...
- by TranquilAwakening |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/31/2010 |
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- Title: sins
- Artist: TranquilAwakening
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Description:
this doesnt have a rythem.. ; nor does it ryhme
but it is not really a poem.. just thoughts... tell me what u think - Date: 05/31/2010
- Tags: sins
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Comments (3 Comments)
- TranquilAwakening - 06/02/2010
- i know that lol i just coldnt thinkif the name o-o and thank you :]
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- Mopsy Midnight - 06/02/2010
- actually, I think even if it has no rythem or ryhming.. its still a poem. lol. I think they call that a "free form poem" or something along those lines. I really like this.
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- TranquilAwakening - 05/31/2010
- i hope this makes it to spotlight o-o i doubt it but im hoping!
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