My Heart Aches

• Artist: Cameron Morgan
• Description: sad, kind of . if you have a heart...
  
• Date: 05/19/2010
• Tags: heart aches love death

I sit watching,
you are young,
still haven't seen life,
my heart aches,
i love you so much,
i don't want to let go,
even as i watch you die in my hands,
i love you,
i care so much for you,
you made my heart leap,
i am going to say goodbye,
even when my heart aches,
and tells me not to go...

Comments

[D3a7h_G0d]

I rather like it, i see room for improvement, but i give you a 5/5.
I thought it was about a parent and a child, a child with an incurable disease, maybe? r like the person below me said, an older person thinking of a younger lover.
I thought it was very good, very realistic.
I write a bit too, similar style, i'd appreciate you checking i out^^

[shayshay21 DDS]

it was ok but i agree with the guy below me.

[XxMentalFilledNinjaxX]

Um...it was alright. I couldn't quit tell if the narrator was a parent or someone in love with....a...young person. Haha. But it was nice over all, too sad and not positive for my liking, nothing personal to that. Soo.... 4/5