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Quivering.
Shaking.
I am held in my spot.
By the invisible forces of aching.
Broken.
Torn.
I don't dare make a move.
For my mind is airborne.
Strangling.
Chocking.
On my lifes last moments.
My sole death is stroking.
Fear.
Denial.
I can't believe my eyes.
So obscene and vial.
Suffocating.
Breathless.
Nothing left for me .
Stripped of all happiness.
Pleading.
Sacraficing.
Now you know how I feel.
When heartbreak takes it's reel.
- by ICanHazPanda |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/17/2010 |
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- Title: The Hidden Meaning.
- Artist: ICanHazPanda
- Description: I am thinking of submiting a few poems to my schools poetry contest. The thing is I know there will be hard contestents , and I dont know if my poety is skilled enough. This is a recent poem I wrote ( Yes most of my poems are about love ) . Please if you have time look at the rest of my poems and PM the 3 I should enter if I do! Please <3.
- Date: 05/17/2010
- Tags: hidden meaning
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Comments (1 Comments)
- BloodStainLoveStory - 05/20/2010
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That was pretty excellent if i do say so myself.
5/5 friend.
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