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A starless silent night,
Rays of silk sliver moonlight,
They gracefully danced into the night,
The spotlight lit the spotlight,
There tattered clothes seemed like silk,
Fireflies orbited around them like planets,
The ally evaporated into granite,
A angelic lullaby rose around the like a mist,
Trash and broken crates morphed to grass,
Walls folded and turned into trees made of glass,
The fireflies fluttered up and flared up into sliver bright shining stars,
The street and the carriages pulled by horses melted into trees of glass,
The girl's tattered clothes turned to a golden slender dress,
The boy's clothes torn clothes morphed into a sliver ball room pants and vest,
She twirled, spun out hands connected and spinning back into his chest,
The soft stare between them was like art,
No more and no less,
For lighted and pure was there beating hearts,
A spin under his arm and face to face they where,
The glass tress and sliver grass became a blur,
As there eyes closed into a kiss for a love so sure,
There beautiful glass and sliver forest melted back into the ally,
Cold stone and broken crates lay among them,
Clatter of horses on the street,
But the sky still had stars like ship fleets,
The moon radiant,
The poor couple's love untainted,
Not even there hardship made them sad,
For each other they had,
An ever so majestic sight of pure love,
Not even death could smudge...
- by Purfect Furday |
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- | Submitted on 04/02/2010 |
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- Title: Moonlight Dance
- Artist: Purfect Furday
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Description:
I wrote this in English class because I was bored and as a kid with A.D.H.D I tend to race my mind. So I wrote this...
If I failed this don't flame me for it. This is the second ever poem I have ever writen. Please don't steal it because I put my heart into it.
If you want to use it Ask.
- Date: 04/02/2010
- Tags: moonlight dance
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Purfect Furday - 04/03/2010
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I know neutral
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- IShadowChiefI - 04/02/2010
- Overall, I thought it was very good. The only suggestion I'd make is perhaps revising the 2nd paragraph, you reused the word "silk" and it didn't really flow as well as the rest of it. Other than that, very good work.
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- Purfect Furday - 04/02/2010
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First post is annoying so I took it.
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