If I had _____ to Live

• Artist: Seraphim6496
• Description: All day today I was thinkin bout what other people would do or say if I had just a few more days to live. But then I realized what other people do doesn;t matter. What would I do differently if I only had a few days left here? Well I would try to be better. I see myslef as a "horrible person." So I really need to be better. But then, I realized I need to work to do better anyways even if i was about to die.
• Date: 03/09/2010
• Tags: live death disease help

If I had just six months to live
What would you say to me?
Would anything change at all
or would life stay the same?
I'd try to change myself
Make myself better
Better than I ever was
Than I am right now
I know I'm bad I know I'm trash
I know I deserve this pain
I need to change for the better
To change the things I do as tho
I had six months to live
If I had one month to live
Could I change the things I do?
Would I make myself do better
To live a pleasing last month (for you(?))
I'd try to change myself
Make myself better
Better than I ever was
Than I am right now
I know I'm bad I know I'm trash
I know I deserve this pain
I need to change for the better
To change the things I do as tho
I had one months to live
If I had one week to live
How would you react to me?
I bet you'd say "Praise God" and pray
That week would speed by; be rid of me
I need to change myself
Make myself better
If only in the hopes that you
just might see the truth
I know I'm bad I know I'm trash
I know I deserve this pain
But my last days would be worth it
If only I could take away your pain and live as tho
I had one week to live
If I had just one day to live
I know what I'd want to do
More than anything for me, I wish
I could take the pain from you
Even more than change myself
And make me better
I want to take away your pain
I'd take the weight for you
I know I'm bad I know I'm trash
I know I deserve this pain
But my last days would be worth it
If only I could take away your pain and live as tho
I had one day to live

Comments

[cocoandnut]

Very touching.As I was reading it I began to think you had written it for the poor little children dying in Africa and all those other places. I was thinking to myself "He wants to change this world for the better before he dies." and it sounded almost as if you were saying "I'll happily give my life to save your life." But in the end thats not actually what it was talking about BUT still I loved it! Well done! XD

[Anime look alike707]

deep man...theres a lesson to be learned here.

[I Are Echo]

Wow! 5/5 that was great!

[Rkah]

I liked the idea alot but I liked the way you put it together. Over all a very good peice. 4/5