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Glimpse Ito The Darkness...
A door opens and you step inside.
Your senses are flooded with so many things.
There is a smell hanging in the air. A smell like iron.
There are an infinite number of sounds all around you.
One is a gunshot that repeats over and over again.
Another is a sound like millions of car alarms & horns going off all at once.
Another is a multitude of voices, all overlapping eachother unable to be made out...
Except for the laughter.
It's everywhere.
There is no escape from it.
It surrounds you and penetrates deep into your soul.
You hear a final sound.
As you turn toward it it becomes louder. But...
The door shuts and you find your self outside once more.
That is because you can only glimpse into the darkness...
Glimpse Into the Darkness of...
The door stays sealed.
You try to find the way to open it once more.
Are you truly that desprate to see that darkness?
The door slowly opens again and you rush in.
The sounds are louder than before.
The smell is stronger as well.
You search for the final sound you heard last time.
Then it is heard.
It echos on the nothingness.
You turn and there is a girl crying.
You go to her and reach out to touch her head.
She turns to dust with your light touch.
You jump back in surprise at what has just occured.
The door shuts but this time...
You are trapped behind it in the darkness...
Soon you will have a glimpse into the darkness of...
Glimpse Into The Darkness Of My Soul...
You are trapped in the darkness.
There are no lights yet you are able to see.
Able to see the people around you.
People laughing...
People smiling...
People crying.
It's as you look at the people crying and you realize...
The people laughing, smiling, and crying...
They are all the same person.
The same girl who turned to dust before, it is her.
It is my other self.
Trapped forever within the darkness with no light.
She can never escape, and she does not try to.
You can never be apart of this.
You can not touch her.
You can only...
...glimpse into the darkness of my soul...
Glimpse Into the Darkness of My Soul But Please...
You continue to stare at her.
Do you plan on saving her?
She stares ahead not noticing you at all...
The images appear again as if to stop you.
You move forward...
Each step seems to make her farther away...
The images grasp you, holding you back.
You struggle against them.
Did you really think you could help her...?
You grimace then...
You call out her name.
The images freeze as she stares up at you.
Then they disappear into dust.
She hesitates then says your name with a confused expression.
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I told you this is only a glimpse into the darkness of my soul but please...
Glimpse Into The Darkness Of My Soul But Please Save...
She has realized that you are there.
You reach out your hand once more.
This time...
She takes it and there is a sound like shattering glass.
She falls unconsious and you catch her.
The images return.
Grabing at her and at you.
You search for the exit from this corruption...
But there is nothing but darkness all around.
You turn to face the images ready to fight them but...
All of them are crying.
They still reach out for her...
What they were created from.
They then slowly vanish once more...
But they will never rise again.
Another breaking sound is heard and tears flow from her eyes.
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I understand now...
I will let you glimpse into the darkness of my soul but please save...
Glimpse Into the Darkness of My Soul But Please Save The Light Within It...
The images were apart of her soul.
Once broken they return to her soul.
She feels their emotions... hence the tears.
You continue to search for an exit to this endless darkness.
.......................
I will release her from the protection that is my soul...
Provided you help her instead.
Once she leaves... I will vanish...
I am only a part of her soul that was born to protect her...
From the world outside this endless darkness...
The world you are apart of... guide her in it...
I gave you a glimpse into the darkness but...
Please save the light within it...
A door opens and you step out with her...
And I... will forever remain...
Here... within the darkness of both our souls...
The door closes and disappears...
Never to re-appear...
Glimpse Into The Darkness And I Will be There...
I am trapped on the inside of the darkness.
She is no longer here...
I am begining to fade from existance...
And the darkness around me begins to grow lighter...
I accept my fate...
I was only born out of fear of the outside world...
I can't walk in it like she is able to...
I will kneel down and wait for my and the darkness' end.
........I give my best wishes to her...
I have no regrets...
...Even if I am only a figment of her mind...
...Can I still pray...? ...Can I still cry...?
...Please let her be safe... Let no one hurt her...
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I hear her... laughing...?
Ha... she's happy... I feel it...
I'm so relieved... I can vanish...
And I will have taken almost all the darkness with me...
..........Farewell... and enjoy your new life...
If you ever need me again...
All you need to do is...
GLIMPSE INTO THE DARKNESS AND I WILL BE THERE...
And now...
I finally fade away...
Good-bye...!
-The darkness fades into nothingness and the glimpse is over.-
- Title: Glimpse Into The Darkness...
- Artist: Cataberry
- Description: The original is on tinierme.com. Was something I did after reading The Cain Saga and GodChild. People can finally realize the true content of my soul from reading this. Please enjoy something I put my heart and soul into.
- Date: 03/03/2010
- Tags: glimpse into darkness soul save
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Zz_bobofish_zZ - 03/20/2010
- It was so . . . intense and emotional. I can tell that you poured your thoughts into this poem. I am wondering if you really do feel the way you make it seem in your poem.
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