her blood: sweet betrayal

• Artist: seven_Sin_incarnate
• Description: a poem about betrayal and cutting my ties with... her
• Date: 02/21/2010
• Tags: blood sweet betrayal

the outside a veil of sinserity.
within, a heart of lies
i sit here so emotionless
as the love that i knew dies

as the blade met the flesh
pushing on through her chest
seperating muscle, soft tissue, and bone
the knife found its mark
driven deep to the heart
slowly sliding its way home

a judas kiss
as the blood hits my fist
the warn crimson fluid
creeping slowly down to my wrist

the blood hits the ground,
painting puddles of pink
the thirsty floor nourished,
it indiscriminatly drinks,

i look in her eyes
as her life starts to die
another sweet kiss,
as tears well up in my eyes

her life fades away,
like a candle in the rain
and i sit here alone
with her blood i am stained
i sit here and weep
the pain ran so deep
as her cold body lay lifeless at my feet

this is my betrayal,
one for another,
her pain was my pain
she was my lover

but she betrayed me
and i cut my ties,
the tether was weathered
through her whirlwind of lies

we are forsaken
so undeniably hated
condemned by god and men
now alone im damned
betrayed so deep from within....

Comments

[rosie1995]

Oh my, this is absolutely beautiful. The words were weaved very nicely, and I felt like I was there watching it.

[zuvenic]

Goodness, this is deep. It made me cry, haha. I really like the words you used and how well you explained it, I swear I almost felt the part where her chest was cut into, it kind of made me cringe. But like I said, you used your words very well. Some people when they write like this, they sound like theyre repeating themselves, or trying to sound too smart. But you didn't sound that way at all, thats why I like it so much. :]