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I feel more pain than other know
Much more than I will show
Half the time my face shows truth
Half the time it shows a mask
Through with no tear shall ever pass
Day by day I dissapear
Day by day I show no fear
I help you vent with good intent
But I think too hard on how you feel
Making your pain feel too real
I cry as you would have
I fall deeper than you could have
Adding your secret to my vault
Knowing simply its no ones fault
Then you thank me, heart less heavy
I continue on my path, now more deadly.
- by MixedShadows |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/17/2010 |
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- Title: The Mask
- Artist: MixedShadows
- Description: A lot of things happened the month I wrote this. It helped me deal with all the chaos.
- Date: 02/17/2010
- Tags: mask
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Loramia - 05/06/2010
- It very good. I agree with Zurah you couldn;t have said it any better.
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- Zurah - 02/20/2010
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Apparition, you couldn't have said it better.
Decent, but wanting less cliche and more expose. The poem is less shitty than most on here, but wanting more work. Stanzas are a good place to start. - Report As Spam