In the Shadows of the Hallway

• Artist: Kazuma Kosetzu
• Description:
• Date: 02/12/2010
• Tags: shadows hallway

Roaming the halls
Pndering my life alone
A loner I guess
In the shadows of darkness
Why must I live without friends?
Wy do I suffer alone?

Am I a monster?
Who did I hurt on purpose?
Or is it just me?
Is it just my way of life?
I did'nt mean to hurt you
I didn't mean to hurt them

I know what to do
I will wander the halls
By myself, alone
For eternity
After I paid my sentence
You may let me see the sky

Comments

[Lilithidae]

I'm not saying 'it should be happier,' just to make the record clear. No, no, trying to add happiness to this poem now would be horribly, horribly out of place, like a rotting corpse on a nice sunny meadow. No, what I'm saying is that poems like this have been run over and over again, until they have the freshness of two-week-old roadkill. Granted, dear EmoCookieZombie,not everybody is happy,but people should try and make a decent effort. Dammit, over the word limit. Can't say everything.

[darkknight90210]

I agree poetry is about feelings not everyone can relate to certain poems but i helps those who feel the same way know that there arent alone

[xXxLoveHugsDrugsxXx]

I love it...and I don't think you should worry about that other girl who left a comment complaining about your poem saying "You should make it happier"...Poetry is written from ones own feelings...and not everyone is happy out in the world...But anyways...I think that it was beautiful!! Wonderful job!!

[Lilithidae]

********. It's another freestyle emo poem. Nothing unique about it, nothing distinguishes it.
Tell me: what to you gain from being sad that is so much better then being happy? Why not write an INSPIRING poem, one that'll move the legions of down-on-their-luck patrons? Why not dare to be different?