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the moon is magic
it can make the blackest night
illuminated.
the moon can cure you,
of all your sad, broken hearts
that someone left you.
the moon hangs so high
surrounded by the cold night,
and starry daughters.
the moons pale face
shows a curious smile
which makes me wonder.
pretty pretty moon,
keep going on shimmering,
with your silver light.

- Title: the moon
- Artist: lambies
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Description:
haiku.
5-7-5
line 1: 5 syllables
line 2: 7 syllables
line 3: 5 syllables.
in case you didn't know. - Date: 01/31/2010
- Tags: moon
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Comments (2 Comments)
- To-Chi VIII - 02/11/2010
- Finally! God, this is the first haiku I've seen on Gaia... Took long enough. And it's good, no less! Good good. Goodgoodgoodgoodgood...
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- Aoife24601 - 02/01/2010
- vary prety
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