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the snow carpets the ground
unmarked by footprints
unblemished white
as far as you can see
so pretty
but so hard to touch
so cold
you touch it
and it hurts
it burns
you start walking
but when you turn to go back
your footprints are gone
it starts snowing agian
you get disoriented
you don't know where you are
you start getting colder
and colder
to the point
where you feel as if your overheating
you start to remove your coat
but something in the back of your mind
tells you not to
so you don't
but your getting scared
the snow is swirling aroung you
you can't see anything
you start to cry
you sit curled up
willing it to stop snowing
but it doesn't
it never stops
you start to give up hope
you can feel the life in you
freezing away
quicker and quicker
your about to let it go
when you hear a voice
calling your name
then you see something
a light
a beacon
but you still can't find the will
to get up and go to it
you feel something
tugging at your arm
and then it stops
and you feel
something standing you up
and taking your hand
leading you to the light
you think;
so this is the famose light
i always thought it'd be brighter
then you feel warmth
and fall into sleep
when you wake up
there's somebody there
they're holding your hand
and crying
when they see your eyes open
they say
thank god
i thought i'd lost you
and you think back
and you relize
you were saved
when you didn't have the
will to save yourself
somebody cared enough
to help and try to save you.

- Title: lost in white
- Artist: Mjosi
- Description: i was saved, i was saved by my friends when i had lost all hope they were still there for me, my friends are the reason i'm still here and i love them, i love my friends they are my will to live...
- Date: 01/17/2010
- Tags: lostpoetrywhitehurtcold
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Farquaadschatz - 01/19/2010
- its nice and cute :]
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- KILLOSAUR - 01/17/2010
- lolwut
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- Uncool Ghoul - 01/17/2010
- oh i love this 5/5
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