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as sunset peaks
atop a pale blue sky,
i feel as if
i'm going to die,
my head swells up,
my toungue dries too,
and all i can think of
is you...
- Title: The Dream
- Artist: kilobite
- Description: I had this dream about my x its so wiered i was in a desert and i heard praying, and then music that i wrote, but the one i made wasn't complete and this was. anyway, comment and look @ my other stuff.
- Date: 01/13/2010
- Tags: dream
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Cyntryli - 04/17/2010
- The content of the poem doesn't matter. Only the words, devices, and mood of the poem. 5/5. Very good job.
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- kilobite - 02/01/2010
- ever heard of a haiku? it's 3 lines long, so DON"T TEL ME WHAT POETRY IS!! OR ISNT!
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- thomulus - 01/29/2010
- interesting idea, but not enough content to be considered a poem
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