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Look me in the eyes
And tell me that
You don't despise
This thing staring back at you
Face me face to face
And tell me you don't think
That its a waste
For me to improve
Then stare me down
You have me now
Just hold your ground
And I won't get through
Tell me what you think
Since I have to listen
Tell me what you feel
That I am missing
Now in my darkest hour
Within my darkest day
I still hear your voice explaining
That I had fell astray
I know you want to save me
But i'm already lost and gone
And though i'll always love you deeply
I'm afraid our war is far from won
I've become this animal
That I know that you hate
But I hate being normal so
You'll have to live with my new state
So let my music fill your heart
With everything I want to say
And in the end we'll fall apart
And become each others prey
Cause in my darkest hour
Within my darkest day
I still hear your voice exclaiming
That I have lost my way
But I only followed my own path
Without you in sight or mind
But I never meant for the aftermath
To cause us to go blind
Now we no longer see each other
As the lovers that we were
But we will still die together
Of that I can assure
In my darkest hour
Within my darkest day
I no longer hear your voice
Tarnishing my name.
- by Hakuo The White Phoenix |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/08/2010 |
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- Title: Your Voice
- Artist: Hakuo The White Phoenix
- Description: A relationship of love and hate.
- Date: 01/08/2010
- Tags: your voice
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Comments (1 Comments)
- To-Chi VIII - 01/13/2010
- *Clap clap clap* Quite good. I found only a mistake or two in grammar, and, though your rythm was off, it seems that your ryhme scheme was fairly uniform. I know punctuation doesn't seem to matter, but I gotta' point out that there was minimal. Other than that, yeah! Good job, comrade!
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