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Okay
Here goes
I haven’t told my story
In a while
Starts with
A betrayal
And ends with
Well, I don’t know yet
That’s how
It is
It might be different
Now
Pretty much
It’s the same deal
Just a different
Background
I went away
From all I
Ever knew
The new place
Seemed good
Enough
Just didn’t know
How good
Until it was
Too late
That’s how
It is
It might be different
Now
Pretty much
It’s the same deal
Just a different
Background
And then
It happened again
Another setting
In the story of life
Now I know
How good and bad
It was
Or what would happen next
That’s how
It is
It might be different
Now
Pretty much
It’s the same deal
Just a different
Background
I did the
Unthinkable
I lost
Someone close
To me
And I couldn’t undo
What I did to
Lose them
Nor would they
Forget it
It was just that bad
That’s how
It is
It might be different
Now
Pretty much
It’s the same deal
Just a different
Background
I guess that’s
How it is
Bu tit’s not different
It’s just
Not the same

- Title: My Story
- Artist: Luv2Liv96
- Description: Written 8/24/09
- Date: 12/29/2009
- Tags: story
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Der Nitsua - 01/16/2010
- Well done, mah friend. Good Word Choice and way of expression.
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- Zachary zi Zriet - 01/01/2010
- while your literary prowess is strikingly beautiful, the odd placement of were your stanzas start and end diminish the beauty of your poem. Nothing an editor can't fix.
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- HTOB - 12/29/2009
- different but the sections dont fit together and uc ould use better vocabulary
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