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I stand here, still
staring at this body
so sick, this body
it is bleeding
Bleeding, everywhere
This body's inside-out
I see so much
A heart still alive
Lungs, They're moving
The stomach, it moves
Slpeen is still pumping
All bones are gone
This body doesn't speak
It sickens me
So I poke it,
with my long cane.
- by The Condom Hebi |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/28/2009 |
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- Title: Ow!
- Artist: The Condom Hebi
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Description:
This is not sooo umm great but if you think about it, it's kinda sick. Sorta like edgar al Poe's stuff. lol
Note on the grammer and spelling (in other words shut up about it)
I'm sick of rude "you poem's spelling/grammer is bad" comments.
Okay, Not everyone is good AT spelling and grammer.
Don't wreck others work because you can't keep your rude comments to yourself. - Date: 12/28/2009
- Tags: gross dead morbid
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Comments (4 Comments)
- The Condom Hebi - 04/09/2010
- i meant poe's black cat, it's sick and describes death as does this!!
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- The Condom Hebi - 04/02/2010
- ok has no one really READ poe?
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- MercurialNight - 01/08/2010
- Sorry, I agree with Yan...Ok in its own right, but nothing like Poe.
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- Yan Qi - 12/30/2009
- It's not bad, but not at ALL like Poe's work. wink No offense.
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