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The eagle flies high in the sky
Its beauty and grace cannot be matched
But the lonely turtle is grounded on the floor
Unable to meet the eagle in the sky
And to slow to catch his opportunities
Alone with no company
So all he can do is watch the beautiful eagle in the sky
Wishing he could be up there in the sky
With the beautiful eagle in the sky
- Title: the eagle and the turtle
- Artist: jortiz14
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- Date: 11/18/2009
- Tags: eagle
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Fiofragen - 11/21/2009
- it is good, but i think you use "the eagle in the sky" way to much, try changing the words a bit but keep the same meaning such as ,"the Eagle above in the heavens" 4/5 good poem, but i have that one sugestion
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