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Bella’s Nightmare
My throat is burning,
My vision blurring,
As I lay defeated on the floor,
Staring back at the door,
Waiting for something to disrupt the silence,
As the air I breathe in becomes more dense,
My tongue tripping over your name,
As I realize I can’t put on you the blame,
I beckon at the dark pulling at my conscience,
Thinking thoughts I shouldn’t even sense,
I shouldn’t know what they feel like to have,
As they divide my mind in halves:
Giving into the lingering darkness,
How without, you my life is meaningless,
How I could I have stopped this,
And the lingering taste of your frozen kiss.
I’m done with pretending I’m okay,
I’m done pretending it’s better this way,
And I’m sure your intentions weren’t this,
Sending me into a translucent, swirling abyss,
I want to run away to find you,
And ask you why you do what you do,
My heart falters as I think of your face,
And suddenly I’m thrown back to my inconsequential place.
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- Title: Bella's nightmare
- Artist: mittlelis
- Description: I wrote this poem about Bella's dark, depressed mood in New Moon *The Book not the movie*
- Date: 11/17/2009
- Tags: bellas nightmare newmoon twilight
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Comments (7 Comments)
- mittlelis - 12/05/2009
- razz ahaha true true
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- chi_7_clone - 12/02/2009
- i love your poems tori!!! it's not as depressing as some of the ones you wrote last year haha smile
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- mittlelis - 12/01/2009
- Thanks sis smile
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- FrozenVendetta - 11/29/2009
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Poetry is subjective to the artist. There doesn't need to be any strucure so all of you who don't agree, shove it.
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- mittlelis - 11/26/2009
- poetry doesn't have to rhyme... it was something i threw together, besides i say screw iambic petmeter, screw convevtional poetry. Poetry is not about following rules and conforming to conceptional views, it's about expressing yourself. Thank you for the comment, but i must strongly disagree...
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- EmmaArchard - 11/26/2009
- Dividing something into lines does not make it a poem. There is very little regard here for assonance, consonance, cadence or internal rhyme.
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- YukikoXX - 11/25/2009
- little depressing there tori... but i love it none the less smile
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