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Under that tree
You seemed so sweet,
So caring.
you seemed...
flawless.
at that alter
you seemed so in love,
so just.
and you planted that kiss upon my lips
i felt so joyous...
in the dark
you seemed so cruel,
so bitter and heartless.
So fake and fabricated.
That was the real you.
With one smack to my face I lost my balance
And tumbled down those flight of stairs.
I tried so hard to get away,
but those gunshots were to get to me first.
Instantly
I lost the light in my eyes.
- by xX_Nada_En_Vano_Xx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/14/2009 |
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- Title: i thought...
- Artist: xX_Nada_En_Vano_Xx
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Description:
just somethin' i felt like writin'! i never really wrote anythin' kinda lovey like this before, so if i sucked at that, tell me what i did wrong!
enjoy! :P - Date: 11/14/2009
- Tags: thought
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Myutunes - 11/15/2009
- I really like the contrasting thing you've got going on there. I think you wrote it really well, with the sentences that were to-the-point and expressive. C:
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