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As I wake up I'm surrounded by darkness
not knowing what has happened
Am I still in the dream
or is this reality?
For me the line between the two blurs
Soon voices come in from all directions
a light blindingly bright burst into my vision
These voices have bodies and faces
that I can't quite make out
Is this my dream or theirs?
They start becoming familiar to me
And I don't want to see
anything anymore
These aren't the faces of demented demons
(like you would think)
But they are my demons
They take the human form
of the ones that I love
And spit out hateful things at me

- Title: My Nightmare
- Artist: XxSAI_KxX
- Description: this is something i came up with after a few ugly flashbacks and it's not quite finished, but writer's block is a b***h so feel free to criticize.
- Date: 11/12/2009
- Tags: nightmare demons dream reality
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Splatter_The_Skyler - 11/12/2009
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It's a beautiful poem
i love how you put words that bought the poem to life
i can even vision in my mind just by thinking about it
10/10 for me ^^ nice job
keep up with the good work sasuke-kun!!!! - Report As Spam