True beauty

• Artist: Crown Pixels
• Description: I guess you can call it a poem. This is for a contest at my school, the theme is pretty obvious isnt it? ^^; Im not going to submit this exactly, this is a simple rough draft. So tell me what you think of it so far with constructive critism, because I could really need some. Oh, I also kinda got inspired by these two songs: Fireflies by Owl City and Said and Done by Meiko. ^^
• Date: 11/10/2009
• Tags: beauty

>>Beauty is the sun setting behind a row of scattered trees, letting the moon take its place in the sky. Beauty is the way the moon and stars shine, capturing the attention of the lonely artist, giving inspiration to one and all.

>>The guitar melody that fills the air as the birds sing a familiar tune, hearing the laughter of a small child as he chases a firefly, that is true beauty. True beauty comes from the little things in life, the things people fail to see, not because they cant see it, but because they choose not too.

Comments

[Crown Pixels]

Thank you ^^.

[DDrox316]

Ok, I just have to admit-(haha, this could turn out good or bad... i like that tension... smile )
After reading the first line, I completely fell in love with this poem <3.
Seriously, it's so pretty... the imagery just attracts me to this so much