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I see my party
Scattered all around me.
The dark dragon lord
Laughs in victorious glee,
But...
I walk, I limp
Towards my unconscious comrades,
Gathering them in retreat.
And soon the laughter fades.
Everyone wakes...
But one...
A life long friend is now gone.
There's a hole in the chest,
Where the dragons tail
Stabbed through.
Now all alone, sitting
Away from my party and
Their fire.
I sit in thought...
"It's my fault, my
Fault that she's gone."
"I shouldn't have them
Climb this tower with me."
"I'm sorry, father, I failed
To regain your honor.
Perhaps I too ran away..."
Looking over my shoulder I see
Them trying to cheer each other up...
In vain...
My thoughts keep pouring in
Like rain from the darkest cloud,
Seeping into the ground.
"Why must this happen?
What can be done now?"
I change my view to down
In front of me.
"A hundred floors up,
No escaping this tower,
Not anymore."
Krylins fly by the opening.
I hear a familiar voice.
Searching for it,
No luck.
The voice continues,
"Why...why did you decide
To climb the tower?"
I pull my knees to my chest
And rests my head,
With no response,
Trying to ignore the question.
A young girl of twenty, dead from years past,
Appears before me.
The voice sounding like it comes from her.
She continues,
"Why brother? What were you hoping
To gain?"
Words form in my mind
And slip off my tongue in reply.
I wanted to prove to our village and myself,
That father didn't run away
In those hard times.
But tried to find a way to help.
I wanted to be a hero...but
Now I realize that I'm a fool."
Kneeling beside me,
Wrapping her gentle,
Comforting arms around
My shoulders.
She gives off a cheerful but
Concerned look, as though telling me
That was the wrong answer.
"Think deep inside yourself brother,
And answer not to me, but yourself."
Eyes close, I relax,
Letting my mind flow.
I remember a vow, to help my
First member to the top.
The harsh, troubled times
My party and I barely got through.
The thought of a friend die
Races through.
The true answer came.
"I want...to be a shield...
A single sturdy shield
So I can protect my friends
And those I care."
Kaiya, my sister, hugs me tightly.
"Thanks Kai, I know now."
She smiles and kisses my forehead
Before disappearing again.
Standing now above my friends,
Huddled around the blazing fire.
Looking each of them in thier eyes,
Getting their attention.
A cloud drifts by,
Darkening my face, where
It was lit by sunlight.
"Friends, for the longest time
I thought I was climbing this tower
For my fathers sake. But now
I understand that I'm here to
Protect you like my shield protects me."
Everyone's head perked up to listen.
"I have trained to be a guardian,
Not what I thought to be a hero.
I have lost the path of guardians'
And thanks to you, I have found it again!
Together, we can beat Kririx,
That dark dragon lord.
Together, we can reach the top floor!"
Thrusting my arm skyward,
The party cheers with
New determination.
The dragon laughs again,
Shaking the still ground.
Another team must have
Retreated or died.
The cries of agony pierces our hearts.
One cry hurted the most.
"Dreal!" Is all I heard.
I look across the floor and see
My brother fall.
- by Deadlylight6 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/31/2009 |
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- Title: Dragons Tower (epic) prt 1
- Artist: Deadlylight6
- Description: i have this typed out and its four pages long already, not even close to finishing. i know its long but most epics are. plz tell me wat u think!
- Date: 10/31/2009
- Tags: dragons tower epic
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Comments (2 Comments)
- kabraxes - 01/29/2010
- Actually for me the length was a good thing. I really enjoyed the poem and i like the story behind it. the one thing that might make it work a little better for me is if you tried to get a little more rhythm into the poem. I mean I can definetely see that there is some rythym and form to it but I had to work a little to find it. Please though don't think that you didn't do a good job this is really nice. keep writing.
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- Deadlylight6 - 11/07/2009
- alrite...other than it being so damn long, wats wrong with it? or is it that u douches see that it is long and dont bother reading then rate a total of 2.5 for this?
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