Tears

• Artist: LonelyXemoXGirlX15
• Description: i am depressed and lonely and so yah i wrote how i felt
• Date: 10/20/2009
• Tags: tears

Right now i wanna cry
Its all because of your lie
What we shared is now over
And you will never be sober
You broke my heart
We fell apart
And now Ill cut my wrists
To show how much I'm pissed

It hurts to see you with her
You cheated on me for sure
I've cried every night
More than when we'd fight
All because you couldn't treat me right
You cheated cause I'm not perfect
You didn't even take time to work it
All you said didn't mean jack
It's a lie how you want me back
You kissed her to hurt me
But really you just don't see
How much I hate you
More than Hitler to a jew
What we had can never be again
It'll just be a memory of when... sad sad sad emo emo heart

Comments

[FaithRavyn]

Hey, this is late, but forget what the user down there said. Obviously they can't write, and when was rhyming overrated? Shakespeare did, as well as Wordsworth, Homer, and many other great poets out there. The user out there doesn't realize that rhyming could be an outlet for you, and I rhyme, it doesn't matter if you do or not. Free verse is also an expressive way of poetry, but every from of poetry, writing, singing, acting, no matter what you do, it's ALL expressive.

[hatsukoi_bby]

ok.
1. You can NOT get off on talking about hitler on the internet in a favorable metaphor. That's nothing worth laughing over.
2. Rhyming poems= overrated. Try some free verse. It's much more expressive and not...well, elementary school sounding.
3. Emotes don't go in poetry!! WTF!!!
4. Emo is over. Over, and overrated. There are a thousand poems just like this one out there. You really want to conform? Try Syvia Plath. Google it. She was depressed, but she actually wrote well. Can you?