"Rings of Saturn" poem

• Artist: Yahagi Shinotsuke
• Description: I liked it and I want to if the Gaian public will think the same. Next, info: Saturn has several rings (duh), that are shaped by Saturn's moons. These moons are called shepard moons. They are destined to be come part of the rings when they get to close the the roche limit (the point where Saturn's gravity rips apart the moons). Saturn's rings are also destined to fall into the planet. Please comment and vote.(if it sucks...say it sucks)
• Date: 10/19/2009
• Tags: rings saturn poem

As the old man sleeps
His rings play many games

Knowing that when he wakes
They will never again see the the light of day

So they play, all night and day
Trying to stay and finih the games

Games that were made by the old man's shepards
Games the shepards force the rings to play

Knowing that one day
They too will be forced to play

This is the fate of the many moons and rings
That bring this old man planet its fame

Fame that one day will go way
Like a a flame that dares to stay out in the rain

A last our tale be true
For only Saturn could be so cruel

By: Jake M. Shuler (aka: Yahagi Sheibi)