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Tonight,
A night as cold
As cold as a winternight
- Off course, you idiot, it IS a winternight! -
- Shut up!! -
Walking
Can't focus anyway
Snow as far as the eye can reach
- Duh it's a WINTERnight -
- you are ruining the poem!!! -
My body is cold
my hands are frozen
My face is too, a bit
- Huh? How did ya face got frozen -
- I was getting to that -
That's how it goes naturally
Water becomes ice
No matter where it's on
- You cried? Haha! -
- Seriously someday i'm gonna kill you -
Why can't i move
Is that really the effect you got on me
I can't take this
Make me die
Make me live but don't leave me this way
- ... -
- Wow, no comments? -
- Shut up i'm following this piece -
I take a look down
My cellphone is still open
The message is still there
How long ago did i opened it
a hour, a day, a week?
Time fades as the heart is broken
- Ok i don't get it -
- Shhhh, just read it -
i remember it well
I was sittin, enjoying the view
Then a message
"This is over..."
Time fades as the heart is broken....
- Dude, she dumped you... -
- kinda -
- sorry bro -
- don't care anymore -
- W8 if you died why are you writting this then -
- never heard of reincarnation? -
- I'm gonna shut up before it gets worse -
- wise thing mate, wise thing to do -
- by Midnight SparkZ |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/16/2009 |
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- Title: Frozen voices
- Artist: Midnight SparkZ
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Description:
Sometimes i hear voices in my head when i'm writing a poem
That gave me the idea of writing these voices down...
- Date: 10/16/2009
- Tags: frozen voices
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Comments (2 Comments)
- kiwijian_01 - 12/03/2009
- thats a genius way of writing man...im sorry that something like that hapened to you.....but an awsome poem anyways...4/5
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- UsakoChanDesu - 10/27/2009
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it's sad aww.
the voices was really funny.
i'm sorry i made a comment. just can't help but say something about this. i've written myself many poems but i've never thought of about having the voices in a poem. i really love it. - Report As Spam